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 Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/13/2003 9:56:56 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Lee Akers, 10/13/2003 10:34:09 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/13/2003 2:53:58 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/14/2003 3:27:45 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Sue, 10/14/2003 7:57:40 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Jill Rizk, 10/14/2003 8:59:07 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/15/2003 7:06:23 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Pete Petro, 10/15/2003 9:17:45 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/15/2003 3:25:01 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Sue, 10/16/2003 1:23:33 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Jill Rizk, 10/16/2003 2:19:34 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/16/2003 4:14:21 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/17/2003 12:51:56 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/17/2003 4:55:44 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Kathy Clapsaddle, 10/18/2003 3:09:16 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/18/2003 4:37:00 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Kathy Clapsaddle, 10/18/2003 5:25:35 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Sue, 10/18/2003 8:39:01 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/19/2003 7:11:10 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Karen Stevenson, 10/19/2003 9:37:50 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/20/2003 12:14:23 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/20/2003 7:57:31 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/20/2003 9:20:44 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/22/2003 6:27:38 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Karen Stevenson, 10/23/2003 7:22:29 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/23/2003 5:00:02 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/25/2003 7:20:49 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/25/2003 8:36:34 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/27/2003 12:17:34 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Karen Stevenson, 10/28/2003 2:54:28 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/28/2003 3:35:44 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/29/2003 7:36:15 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/29/2003 9:16:47 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/30/2003 3:43:30 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 10/31/2003 12:25:04 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Karen Stevenson, 10/31/2003 5:37:11 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 10/31/2003 11:11:03 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Karen Stevenson, 11/2/2003 11:07:16 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/3/2003 7:34:26 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/3/2003 11:23:48 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/3/2003 11:25:26 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Karen Weeding, 11/3/2003 1:24:13 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Jill Rizk, 11/3/2003 2:44:35 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/3/2003 2:51:34 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/4/2003 11:33:51 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/4/2003 1:59:50 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/4/2003 2:34:18 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/4/2003 2:40:12 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/5/2003 6:05:58 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Sue, 11/5/2003 9:05:38 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/5/2003 9:13:37 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/5/2003 9:51:52 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/6/2003 7:34:35 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/6/2003 7:47:28 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/6/2003 5:28:29 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Antonia Klein, 11/6/2003 9:38:46 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/7/2003 6:32:31 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/7/2003 7:08:02 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Heath H, 11/8/2003 11:42:51 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/8/2003 2:04:17 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/8/2003 6:58:57 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/8/2003 7:44:30 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/8/2003 10:16:58 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/8/2003 10:29:14 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/9/2003 11:27:48 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/9/2003 7:58:00 PM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, pulmonade, 11/10/2003 7:28:25 AM
 RE: Haiku, one line at a time 2, Donator Tucker Bolton, 11/10/2003 7:45:19 AM
 Subject: Haiku, one line at a time 2
Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/13/2003 9:56:56 AM From:
Lets start another page. We will go with Sue's new first line. I will start a fresh Limerick line also.
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The clock strikes high noon
thoughts turn to mid-day hunger
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Author: Lee Akers  Posted: 10/13/2003 10:34:09 AM From:
The clock strikes high noon
Thoughts turn to mid-day hunger
Peanut butter clings
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/13/2003 2:53:58 PM From:
Dont forget, if you finish a Haiku or Limerick to start a new one.
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Music fills the room
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/14/2003 3:27:45 PM From:
Music fills the room
the spirit rises and falls
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Author: Sue  Posted: 10/14/2003 7:57:40 PM From:
Music fills the room
the spirit rises and falls
Swaying to the sound
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cold water running
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Author: Jill Rizk  Posted: 10/14/2003 8:59:07 PM From:
cold water running
the water heater has quit
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/15/2003 7:06:23 AM From:
cold water running
the water heater has quit **Jill, you're so silly. :<wink
shivering in tub
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Los Angeles smog
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Author: Pete Petro  Posted: 10/15/2003 9:17:45 AM From:
Los angeles smog
Eyes burning
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/15/2003 3:25:01 PM From:
Pete,
The structure for haiku is five syllables then seven then five.
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Los Angeles smog
My eyes blinking and burning
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Author: Sue  Posted: 10/16/2003 1:23:33 PM From:
Los Angeles smog
My eyes blinking and burning
hazy traffic noise
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Road from Miles City
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Author: Jill Rizk  Posted: 10/16/2003 2:19:34 PM From:
Road from Miles City
Dodging gray deer and dark cows
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/16/2003 4:14:21 PM From:
Road from Miles City
Dodging gray deer and dark cows
eyes strain with each turn
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soft sounds in the dark

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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/17/2003 12:51:56 PM From:
soft sounds in the dark
quiet cloud of stealth afoot
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/17/2003 4:55:44 PM From:
soft sounds in the dark
quiet cloud of stealth afoot
troubled sleep comes late
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silver, sliver moon
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Author: Kathy Clapsaddle  Posted: 10/18/2003 3:09:16 PM From:
night sky illuminating
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/18/2003 4:37:00 PM From:
silver, sliver moon
night sky illuminating
coyote serenade
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welcome Kathy
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River runs silent
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Author: Kathy Clapsaddle  Posted: 10/18/2003 5:25:35 PM From:
deep and green, still waters sooth
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Author: Sue  Posted: 10/18/2003 8:39:01 PM From:
River runs silent
deep and green, still waters sooth
meditative gaze
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sweet smells of mother
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/19/2003 7:11:10 AM From:
sweet smells of mother
sundress summer clothsline day
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Author: Karen Stevenson  Posted: 10/19/2003 9:37:50 PM From:
sweet smells of mother
sundress sunshine clothesline day
blow gently to me
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Neon dragonflies
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/20/2003 12:14:23 AM From:
Neon dragonflies
wings of stained glass window panes
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/20/2003 7:57:31 AM From:
Neon dragonflies
wings of stained glass window panes
fishing wishing breese
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Meadowlark morning
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/20/2003 9:20:44 AM From:
Meadowlark morning
Sing to the sun, feathered waif
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/22/2003 6:27:38 AM From:
Meadowlark morning
Sing to the sun, feathered waif
explore from above
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Days rolling to fast
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Author: Karen Stevenson  Posted: 10/23/2003 7:22:29 AM From:
Days rolling too fast
tumble weeds and golden leaves
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/23/2003 5:00:02 PM From:
Days rolling too fast
tumble weeds and golden leaves
snow clouds coming soon
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Hi Karen, good to see your words again. smile
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Softly the winds came
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/25/2003 7:20:49 AM From:
Softly the winds came
Lithe, invisible currents
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/25/2003 8:36:34 AM From:
Softly the winds came
Lithe, invisible currents
embrace all creatures
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Friends that go and come
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/27/2003 12:17:34 PM From:
Friends that go and come
Puzzle pieces of the heart
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Author: Karen Stevenson  Posted: 10/28/2003 2:54:28 PM From:
Friends that go and come
Puzzle pieces of the heart
Fit to make a whole.

Galloping,soaring
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/28/2003 3:35:44 PM From:
Galloping,soaring
hooves beat thunder from the earth
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/29/2003 7:36:15 AM From:
Galloping,soaring
hooves beat thunder from the earth
running the plains.......free
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rain scent came early
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/29/2003 9:16:47 AM From:
rain scent came early
prelude to the raging storm
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/30/2003 3:43:30 PM From:
rain scent came early
prelude to the raging storm
gathering storm clouds
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first snow came easy
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 10/31/2003 12:25:04 PM From:
first snow came easy
Tears of Winter fell frozen

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Author: Karen Stevenson  Posted: 10/31/2003 5:37:11 PM From:
FIrst snow came easy
Tears of Winter fell frozen
upon ashes of autumn.

Downy feather floats
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 10/31/2003 11:11:03 PM From:
Downy feather floats
grand palet of blue and white
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Author: Karen Stevenson  Posted: 11/2/2003 11:07:16 PM From:
Downy feather floats
grand palette of blue and white
painting color on the wind.


Horse tails in the sky
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/3/2003 7:34:26 AM From:
Horse tails in the sky
washing soft a crying crow
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/3/2003 11:23:48 AM From:
Horse tails in the sky
washing soft a crying crow
synchronicity
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/3/2003 11:25:26 AM From:
green carpet of grass
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Author: Karen Weeding  Posted: 11/3/2003 1:24:13 PM From:
green carpet of grass
a secret under the snow
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Author: Jill Rizk  Posted: 11/3/2003 2:44:35 PM From:
green carpet of grass
a secret under the snow
yawn and stretch toward spring

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cold cows are huddled

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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/3/2003 2:51:34 PM From:
cold cows are huddled
gleaning birds are now southbound
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/4/2003 11:33:51 AM From:
cold cows are huddled
gleaning birds are now southbound
trees bare brittle limbs

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echoing voices
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/4/2003 1:59:50 PM From:
echoing voices
minds eye sees faces long past
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/4/2003 2:34:18 PM From:
echoing voices
minds eye sees faces long past
together again

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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/4/2003 2:40:12 PM From:
sky, heavy with gray
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/5/2003 6:05:58 AM From:
sky, heavy with gray
thick...wet...bone numbing...silence
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Author: Sue  Posted: 11/5/2003 9:05:38 AM From:
sky, heavy with gray
thick...wet...bone numbing...silence
solitude unquiet
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coffee aroma
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/5/2003 9:13:37 AM From:
coffee aroma
sobering scent of morning
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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/5/2003 9:51:52 AM From:
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/6/2003 7:34:35 AM From:
coffee aroma
sobering scent of morning
shaking off stardust
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mirrored reflection
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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/6/2003 7:47:28 AM From:
mirrored reflection
images never the same

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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/6/2003 5:28:29 PM From:
mirrored reflection
images never the same
once you turn your head

burn my effigy
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Author: Antonia Klein  Posted: 11/6/2003 9:38:46 PM From:
smoke wafts through my nostrils
stinging my eyes
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/7/2003 6:32:31 AM From:
Antonia, when you finish a haiku please feel free to start a new one. I will get this one going.wink
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Skeptical crows watch
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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/7/2003 7:08:02 AM From:
skeptical crows watch
feigning willful human thought

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Author: Heath H  Posted: 11/8/2003 11:42:51 AM From:
skeptical crows watch
feigning willful human thought
smug, feathered scoundrels
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ground frost of the field
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/8/2003 2:04:17 PM From:
ground frost of the field
new spring life sleeping....waiting
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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/8/2003 6:58:57 PM From:
ground frost of the field
new spring life sleeping....waiting
widows neath the veil.

footstep sundered plains
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/8/2003 7:44:30 PM From:
footstep sundered plains
abandoned forgotten bare
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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/8/2003 10:16:58 PM From:
footstep sundered plains
abandoned forgotten bare
such a thing is rare

a tongue licks my town

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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/8/2003 10:29:14 PM From:
a tongue licks my town
flaming consuming purging
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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/9/2003 11:27:48 AM From:
a tongue licks my town
flaming consuming purging
uncoiling it's wrath

corpulent wasteland
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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/9/2003 7:58:00 PM From:
corpulent wasteland
stubornly clinging to life
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Author: pulmonade  Posted: 11/10/2003 7:28:25 AM From:
corpulent wasteland
stubornly clinging to life
counting every breath

solaced in silence

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Author: Donator Tucker Bolton  Posted: 11/10/2003 7:45:19 AM From:
OK, hold on let's take this new one to Haiku 3. Come on follow me, don't be afraid.
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