Haiku, one line at a time 2
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Lets start another page. We will go with Sue's new first line. I will start a fresh Limerick line also.
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The clock strikes high noon
thoughts turn to mid-day hunger
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Posted by Lee Akers 11 years ago
The clock strikes high noon
Thoughts turn to mid-day hunger
Peanut butter clings
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Dont forget, if you finish a Haiku or Limerick to start a new one.
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Music fills the room
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Music fills the room
the spirit rises and falls
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Posted by Sue 11 years ago
Music fills the room
the spirit rises and falls
Swaying to the sound
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cold water running
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Posted by Jill Rizk 11 years ago
cold water running
the water heater has quit
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
cold water running
the water heater has quit **Jill, you're so silly. :<
shivering in tub
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Los Angeles smog
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Posted by Pete Petro 11 years ago
Los angeles smog
Eyes burning
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Pete,
The structure for haiku is five syllables then seven then five.
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Los Angeles smog
My eyes blinking and burning
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Posted by Sue 11 years ago
Los Angeles smog
My eyes blinking and burning
hazy traffic noise
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Road from Miles City
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Posted by Jill Rizk 11 years ago
Road from Miles City
Dodging gray deer and dark cows
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Road from Miles City
Dodging gray deer and dark cows
eyes strain with each turn
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soft sounds in the dark

[This message has been edited by Tucker Bolton (edited 10/16/2003).]
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
soft sounds in the dark
quiet cloud of stealth afoot
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
soft sounds in the dark
quiet cloud of stealth afoot
troubled sleep comes late
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silver, sliver moon
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Posted by Kathy Clapsaddle 11 years ago
night sky illuminating
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
silver, sliver moon
night sky illuminating
coyote serenade
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welcome Kathy
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River runs silent
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Posted by Kathy Clapsaddle 11 years ago
deep and green, still waters sooth
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Posted by Sue 11 years ago
River runs silent
deep and green, still waters sooth
meditative gaze
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sweet smells of mother
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
sweet smells of mother
sundress summer clothsline day
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Posted by Karen Stevenson 11 years ago
sweet smells of mother
sundress sunshine clothesline day
blow gently to me
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Neon dragonflies
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
Neon dragonflies
wings of stained glass window panes
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Neon dragonflies
wings of stained glass window panes
fishing wishing breese
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Meadowlark morning
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
Meadowlark morning
Sing to the sun, feathered waif
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Meadowlark morning
Sing to the sun, feathered waif
explore from above
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Days rolling to fast
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Posted by Karen Stevenson 11 years ago
Days rolling too fast
tumble weeds and golden leaves
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Days rolling too fast
tumble weeds and golden leaves
snow clouds coming soon
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Hi Karen, good to see your words again.
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Softly the winds came
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
Softly the winds came
Lithe, invisible currents
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Softly the winds came
Lithe, invisible currents
embrace all creatures
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Friends that go and come
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
Friends that go and come
Puzzle pieces of the heart
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Posted by Karen Stevenson 11 years ago
Friends that go and come
Puzzle pieces of the heart
Fit to make a whole.

Galloping,soaring
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
Galloping,soaring
hooves beat thunder from the earth
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Galloping,soaring
hooves beat thunder from the earth
running the plains.......free
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rain scent came early
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
rain scent came early
prelude to the raging storm
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
rain scent came early
prelude to the raging storm
gathering storm clouds
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first snow came easy
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
first snow came easy
Tears of Winter fell frozen

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Posted by Karen Stevenson 11 years ago
FIrst snow came easy
Tears of Winter fell frozen
upon ashes of autumn.

Downy feather floats
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Downy feather floats
grand palet of blue and white
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Posted by Karen Stevenson 11 years ago
Downy feather floats
grand palette of blue and white
painting color on the wind.


Horse tails in the sky
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Horse tails in the sky
washing soft a crying crow
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
Horse tails in the sky
washing soft a crying crow
synchronicity
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
green carpet of grass
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Posted by Karen Weeding 11 years ago
green carpet of grass
a secret under the snow
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Posted by Jill Rizk 11 years ago
green carpet of grass
a secret under the snow
yawn and stretch toward spring

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cold cows are huddled

[This message has been edited by Jill Rizk (edited 11/3/2003).]
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
cold cows are huddled
gleaning birds are now southbound
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
cold cows are huddled
gleaning birds are now southbound
trees bare brittle limbs

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echoing voices
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
echoing voices
minds eye sees faces long past
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
echoing voices
minds eye sees faces long past
together again

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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
sky, heavy with gray
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
sky, heavy with gray
thick...wet...bone numbing...silence
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Posted by Sue 11 years ago
sky, heavy with gray
thick...wet...bone numbing...silence
solitude unquiet
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coffee aroma
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
coffee aroma
sobering scent of morning
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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
coffee aroma
sobering scent of morning
shaking off stardust
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mirrored reflection
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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
mirrored reflection
images never the same

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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
mirrored reflection
images never the same
once you turn your head

burn my effigy
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Posted by Antonia Klein 11 years ago
smoke wafts through my nostrils
stinging my eyes
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
Antonia, when you finish a haiku please feel free to start a new one. I will get this one going.
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Skeptical crows watch
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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
skeptical crows watch
feigning willful human thought

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Posted by Heath H 11 years ago
skeptical crows watch
feigning willful human thought
smug, feathered scoundrels
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ground frost of the field
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
ground frost of the field
new spring life sleeping....waiting
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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
ground frost of the field
new spring life sleeping....waiting
widows neath the veil.

footstep sundered plains
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
footstep sundered plains
abandoned forgotten bare
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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
footstep sundered plains
abandoned forgotten bare
such a thing is rare

a tongue licks my town

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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
a tongue licks my town
flaming consuming purging
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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
a tongue licks my town
flaming consuming purging
uncoiling it's wrath

corpulent wasteland
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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
corpulent wasteland
stubornly clinging to life
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Posted by pulmonade 11 years ago
corpulent wasteland
stubornly clinging to life
counting every breath

solaced in silence

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Posted by Tucker Bolton 11 years ago
OK, hold on let's take this new one to Haiku 3. Come on follow me, don't be afraid.
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